Thursday, May 21, 2009

Simile




The Men sat down in a battared trench, fearing the battle to come,


as a child fears it's first day at a new school, with no knowledge of what is to come of the coming day, feeling the nervusness of the unkown.


The scrambe to find their classes, as the men will soon scramble to be the ones undercover before the enemy comes forth. Just as the children scramble before the teacher is ready to begin the lesson. The soldiers found their guns and held them as life-savingly as the children hold to their friends at school,


never wanting to be left with out it. never wanting to be trapped in a hostal area, like a battle field, or as a school, with out the support.


1 comment:

  1. Even though you are a mean person I guess I will comment your blog.I think your epic simile is pretty awesome. I'm not just saying that because we are bros. I think that school can be compared to a battle. They are totally opposite things but the way that you compaired them in your epic simile made them seem like good. NOTW

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